This 100 word piece was written using the photo prompt below (photo supplied by Jeff Arnold) for Friday Fictioneers
It had taken seven years for him to complete his glass-encased diorama from his wheelchair. Every evening and most days would be spent working with tiny tools and a high-powered magnifying glass, to re-create the seaside village where he was born, lived and died. His home, the boatsheds and every boat were true to that time. The final touch was the rainbow, symbolising both his hopes for the future and the inevitable disappointments in his life as he searched in vain for its end. Years after I inherited it, I noticed him in his blue sailing jacket, the immortal sailor.
Time moves on, but not in this dioramas case. (Consider it Liked, WordPress= contrary again.)
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Thanks, mate.
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A most appropriate piece at this particular point in time, Doug. A bit different from your usual style – I really like it. Have a great Easter.
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Thanks, Robbie, and the same to you and yours.
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I like the detail you managed to pick out. Nice story painted.
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Thank you, Iain, much appreciated.
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On the first read I took this to be a ghost story.
Now I don’t know, but I like it, so I don’t care!
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Many thanks, Ceayr. I never cease to be intrigued by how readers see my posts in a light that never occurred to me. It wasn’t meant to be a ghost story; simply a tale of a man who used to sail who wanted his world preserved as he remembered it.
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A poisoned inheritance, perhaps…
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Loved this tale.
Tracey
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Doug, I always enjoy your posts. This one, however, spoke to me in a very different way. My dad was a sailor, a Navy guy, and he loved all things marine. I still have a little wooden figurine I gave him several years before he died–a grizzled old sea captain wearing a bright blue jacket.
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Hi, Granonine. WP somehow hasn’t been alerting me to all comments recently, hence the delay in responding to your kind words. One never knows when a post will provide a serendipitous thought to a reader.
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It happens now and then. Pobody’s nerfect 🙂
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It took years to notice the blue figure, it obviously wasn’t there before…
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You do like a bit of intrigue, don’t you, Janet 😉
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John Lennon is coming to mind, “whatever gets you through the night.” Good story.
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Many thanks and apt comment
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You are welcome, Doug.
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A different and absorbing take on the photo. I enjoyed this.
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Many thanks, Sandra
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Dear Doug,
Last year we visited a miniature museum in Kansas City. It’s amazing what some can do, the scenes and objects recreated in tiny detail. I could imagine this scene. I wonder if the sailor himself is in there as in a Twilight Zone that starred Robert Duvall in the early 60’s or if the sailor created an image of himself. Either well, the story is well constructed.
Shalom and good health,
Rochelle
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Thank you kindly, Rochelle. If you look carefully he’s on the blue and white boat, second from the right, wearing a blue jacket. 🙂 btw I used to love the Twilight Zone and it’s amazing how many famous actors got their start on that show. I also remember Robert Duvall’s cameo as Boo Radley in To Kill a Mockingbird.
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A gentler version of the Flying Dutchman. What had he done to deserve the curse of immortality?
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He chose immortality. Not a curse but an opportunity to live beyond his allocated time on the mortal coil.
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I love the way he memorialized his life to be passed on. Great detail!
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Many thanks, Brenda.
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A telling picture of “the old man”. Good job.
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Thank you, Eugenia.
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